Writing Center

The experience that we have today was very helpful for both parts because we have the opportunity of see some of our classmates vlogs and comment to them, with this activity we had the opportunity to gave them some advice about their vlogs what we thing about it, and see their structure of writing, how their vlogs are different from our. I decide to comment Angel’s and Maria’s, in the case of Algel he have a good vlog but her writing is most like a text massage, he write with a lot of like, you know and all that kind of steps, I try to give some advice telleing him that he got a making longer because his vlogs were less that the required he does not even get the minimum, so I try to tell him what to do to make it better. In the case of Maria was totally different because her ideas were more connected, more clear with sequence etc, but they both had the same problems, they have to make their writing longer and satisfied the teacher’s necessity. I try to tell her the most as I can, things like are more details to it, be more specific, try to talk more about her different ideas and opinion about the class and the different assignments.