Wednesday, September 2, 2009

My unsatisfied grade.

Hi Karla, yes what? She gave a 60 on mine essay I am really upset because I did the best on that essay and now she came to my with a 60 is not fair for me because she read my introduction and told me that it was a good way to start, I really want to have a conversation about it with her, when she check my essay I though she was helping me on my final grade. Even in the last day she talk to my about my essay and help me making some corrections to it, I don’t really understood her reason on giving me a F and my final draft I feel so sad about it because the essay was the grade on my record, and with a 60 I think that my grades keep going down, I would like that she would gave me another opportunity to make it again, that would help me to understand my errors, and disabilities, you know that the writing is not my favorite topic, I hate to write because I always have the same problem, my main is just in blank when I have to write, also I know that the teacher has her favorite students. She is so roof with the other part of the classmates, I don’t like her I don’t really know why because I have been always responsible in her class I do my homework, I participate in her activities, but this still, she has never give 100 on my work even when I know that I have the right answer, I going to talk to her and ask her about it, I just want to know what is the problem? You know what is wrong with mine paper don’t you think that’s a good idea for me to find the really problem with my writing because like I told you on the beginning of this conversation she read my essay, and made corrections to it, she has to listen to me and give me an explication. Because I am really upset about that 60. Bye friend…..

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