Workshop

The different experiences that we have in this classroom is special because every single time we learned something new, that teacher now how to plan her class so this is not bored, today is was experience was different because we share with our classmates the different essay that we have every single one of us read our paper, and asked a question about our paper like am I doing this right, how to make it longer, did I did this ok? Between another, I really like this activity because that helped us to make some corrections to our paper the teacher also gave us some clues of how we can write the essay, most of this class was discussion between everybody, because like our group the others groups have to be doing the same. That was funny how everybody was afraid to read allow, because I thought I was the only one in the class that was I little bit shy, but not because everybody was like now you, not you and gone on and on. My paper was longer than everybody else’s was, they told me that I need to make it smaller, but I asked the teacher and she told it was right if I want to write more then 3 paragraphs, and I laugh because I had that concern after that I heard all the papers gave them an opinion of what I think, and some recommendations for them like add more details, be more specific, etc. they also gave recommendations, like don’t use emotional things because I have a phrase like this, “I am so sad.” so my classmates told delete that and add real reason of why she have to give you better grade on your essay. That was also I really like the format that the teacher use with us in this classroom.